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I Still Wait by ~mydimension:iconmydimension:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




I search, I search never to find.
I rage within. I made it mine.

I hate.
I need.
I crash.
I bleed.

This wound I carry, carried for you.
This heart aches, only for you.

I strugle.
I beat.
I yearn.
I weap.

Alone I wait. Oblivious you run.
See these eyes, torrid of misery.
Inside I hide. Inside I hurt.
Patience I keep. Hope I need.

I love.
I wait.
I hope.
I believe.

Friends we were. And so we stay.
See me cry. See my love.

I still hope.
I still wait.
I still love.
I will wait.
©2003-2009 ~mydimension
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Author's Comments

Today I found out that the girl I have had an intrest in for over two years began dating one of my friends. After all this time, I do not think she knows how I feel. I am hesitant to tell her for fear of hurting our friendship.

I wrote this piece while trying to explore my emotions. My first reaction was to hate both of them. But that would get me no where. I turned myself to hope and resolved to continue to love her. I shall wait for her.

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*mr-eric Nov 8, 2003, 1:30:08 PM
You've packed a lot of emotion into this piece--good work my friend.

love lasts thoughout

-~Eric
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