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Abounding Serenity by ~mydimension:iconmydimension:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




what is this place i find?
solitude and peace
abounding serenity.

i come here to escape the pain
this world has brought me down
here i find the strength
enough to move on.

comfort surrounds me
others have joined the fight
out there it is hard to breath
in here it all seems right.

and now i find i can move on
although the world still seems so wrong
the assurance of my peers
wipes away my tears.

so to you i thank for your words and arms
things seem right; again the pieces fit
and from the dark i bring this creation
the world i know as mydimension.


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© 04/22/2002
mydimension
©2002-2009 ~mydimension
:iconmydimension:

Author's Comments

[ my entry for the "All About My Name" contest ]

i wish to explain what my nickname means to me. all to often i come off with one liners saying that it means this or that. now i have something to give to people.

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~saladin Apr 24, 2002, 8:24:47 AM
There's nothing better than a good dose of serentiy.
This is great work. I liked the rhyme scheme and the poem flowed well.
Glad to hear you found your special place! :D (Big Grin)
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Who is it that says most? Which can say more than this rich praise, that you alone are you?
:iconjustagirl:
~justagirl Apr 24, 2002, 9:43:03 AM
very nice, as was sad it flows nicely :) (Smile)
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.::your innocence i will consume::.
:iconfairyinboots:
~fairyinboots Apr 27, 2002, 8:47:57 AM
I like it muchly, and I'm happy you've found a personal sanctuary.
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I wish more people would call me a Master Of Prestidigitation...
:iconseamaire:
~seamaire Apr 28, 2002, 8:37:31 AM
oooh :) (Smile) how lovely, and i know this seeking to find sanctuary here :) (Smile) very good, and very good last line.
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prick an ivory finger
see the crimson match the rose
if you watch it from to close
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